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I'll Come Back For You
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 12:46:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Could I maybe take some time
To touch your heart with mine
Pull you close
And make sure you know
I may not always be near
But my love will keep me here
And have no doubt
It continues to grow
I know it’s
Never ever easy
Bein’ miles apart
But this is something
We both knew
From the very start
And I’ll come back for you
I swear I’m gonna see this through
Please believe me when you hear me say
I’ll come back to you
Babe you know, I swear it’s true
There is nothin’ in this world
That could ever
Keep me away
Let me put my arms around you
Won’t you let my love surround you
Hold you to me
Once more urgently
Now it’s time I must be going
But I don’t wanna leave you without knowing
Somewhere deep inside
That you believe
I’m comin' back for you
I swear I’m gonna see this through
Please believe me when you hear me say
I’ll come back to you
Babe you know, I swear it’s true
There is nothin’ in this world
That could ever
Keep me away
Yes I’ll come back for you
Something that I plan to prove
And it’s only gonna be for a little while
I’ll come back to you
Babe you know I swear it’s true
Even if I fall
If I have to crawl
The last hundred miles
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Nazmythian
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2005-09-14 00:46:35]
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Re: I'll Come Back For You
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 01:39:40 AM AEST
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so moving it has brought tears to my eyes I can picture the scene in my minds eye. It really touches close since there are so many right now separated from their loved ones I feel many will find a great comfort in reading this
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Re: I'll Come Back For You
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by Rxqueen on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 08:59:23 AM AEST
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Oh how I missed your poetry... Yours is the first I have read since I finally got back on the site. I am glad I did. This peice was moving for me. It hit a nerve deep inside. Being married to a guy in the Military saying goodbye is a frequent thing, yet each time it gets harder. I ecspecially liked these parts: "Let me put my arms around you
Won’t you let my love surround you
Hold you to me
Once more urgently"
"Even if I fall
If I have to crawl
The last hundred miles"
Beautifully written. I look forward to catching up on some of your work. XOXOX |
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Re: I'll Come Back For You
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by brew on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 10:18:33 AM AEST
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a write, that you would let flow from your heart.! that was neat to presume what the convo was. Given your own opinion for that, leaves the reader, to know that is what was in your heart as well.! Great write.
Brew~ |
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Re: I'll Come Back For You
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 12:59:34 PM AEST
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Lovely, Scott.
I like how you've used your imagintion with this. It's very special.
I like the repetition in this, and how the rhyme scheme changes halfway through.
Well done.
Good write,
*hugs*
Phil xxx
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Re: I'll Come Back For You
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 02:39:01 PM AEST
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claps ,.... Bravo! Nazzy
An inspiring piece, great form and flow.
I love the fact you sat there and imagined it. I would bet you pretty close to the mark too.
and YOU were at the aiport because....? |
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Re: I'll Come Back For You
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 12:44:14 PM AEST
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Naz,
The only limit to your imagination would seem to be what doesn't enter your mind. Everything else is converted to creative energy. This reads like a song, albeit very poetic as well. That couple was quite the inspiration.
A beautiful piece Nazzi
Will/Terry |
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Re: I'll Come Back For You
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 04:36:14 PM AEST
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Nazzy,
You paint such a beautiful picture with words. I am so
moved by your loving writes. Inspired by a couple at the
airport huh? Must be the romantic in you.
Wonderfully beautiful Naz. Makes me believe in wishes and dreams.
You are an incredibly inspiring poet. Well done!
~Breezy |
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Re: I'll Come Back For You
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by Kazzy1231 on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 05:24:45 PM AEST
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| Nice write,Please check out some of my poems! |
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