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The way I will always feel
Contributed by
jacobmanning
on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 12:22:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If I were to fall in love,
It would have to be with you.
Your eyes, your smile,
The way you laugh,
The things you say and do.
You take me to the places,
My heart never knew.
So, if I were to fall in love,
It would have to be with you.
If I were to give my heart,
It would have to be to you,
For you bring things into my life,
So beautiful and new.
Love, so soft and warm beside me,
That I know it’s true,
If I were to give my heart,
It would have to be to you.
I was looking for an answer.
I was looking for a way.
To keep the magic that you bring,
To each and every day.
It started with a feeling,
And every day it grew,
So, when I knew I was in love,
It had to be with you.
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jacobmanning
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2005-09-14 00:22:15]
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Re: The way I will always feel
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 12:41:14 AM AEST
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Well, I wasn't in the mood for a love poem, but I'm glad I read this. Very nice write Jacob. It's sweet. I like how the first two stanzas have the same last line, and then for the final stanza you give a definitive answer in the last line. Does that make sense? lol Forgive me, I'm tired!
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Re: The way I will always feel
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by anitajames on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 10:48:58 AM AEST
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| I love this poem. Makes me think of my husband. Good job. |
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