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Rearview
Contributed by
LivefortheMoment
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Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 10:36:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Holding your hand, Out the Window
Feel the Rush of life fly by
Catch your smile in the rearview,
I Realize I've lost all sence of time
For Now It is simply you and me,
Frozen together,
Meant to be,
Floating through this sea of wonder
Our Dreams are hopes that Life can't Plunder
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LivefortheMoment
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2005-09-13 22:36:32]
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Re: Rearview
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by brew on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 10:38:43 PM AEST
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Now this poem was great..........very, simple; and very lovely. it made one look back to memories, as you typed. Yes......Great write.! Dont you wish , it all could be like that>?.All the time?!!!!!!!!
Brew~ |
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Re: Rearview
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by LivefortheMoment on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 10:43:00 PM AEST
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| It's Good to hear someone say that, When writing about a memory, its hard to stay unbias in the observation of the piece itself.. Im glad you could enjoy it as well |
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