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Why Are We All Doomed
Contributed by
Lancaster
on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 08:48:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I was feeling spontaneous
But the spurt has dispersed
With the moment that burst
And so I become my grievance
In accordance and adherence
With the manipulations of emotions
A predominance of error
Overshadows any firm conclusions
Feed the restitution
Pay back the dedication
With nothing less
Than enamored smiles that breed confusion
Contribute to the cause and honor
Which play by no rules
Have no shield or armor
Cognitive tools
To infiltrate with a platoon
Served on a plate
The wine never hits too soon
The stars never fail in comparison to the moon
Then why are we doomed?
Don’t ever assume
It leads to assumptions
If you lift the gold cup
Be prepared for consumption
If the high never goes up
And the low wont stop
Be prepared for an influx
Of tears to hit the ducts
And open up the city blocks
I have been up since six o’clock
The ticking never stops
The blinking only drops
An eyelid in a snatch
Sleep is no match
Death is on watch
It may all black
And never go back
And so, why are we doomed?
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Lancaster
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Re: Why Are We All Doomed
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 09:14:57 PM AEST
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Chicken ; )
I like this. Everything is doomed, everyone is confused, and so is life...ahhhh! But let's not assume. lol. Very well done with this write.
H.S.
(Who is going out)
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Re: Why Are We All Doomed
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by brew on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 10:23:23 PM AEST
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Very , very differ. Liked the abstract of the write in a whole. So why , you think things are doomed.?!hm....
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Re: Why Are We All Doomed
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 09:51:50 PM AEST
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Hmmmm....a bit gloomy & scarey...and powerful. Great write. :)
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