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Dreaming of You
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 08:37:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Last night I had a dream about you
Well, that much isn’t that new
I could clearly see that smile on your face
And even in my dream you were still on my case
I can’t exactly remember the entire dream
But I can picture everything from the way you lean
To the way you grin and the way you hold me
I have deep feelings for you, don’t you see?
I can just picture your face, that is all
Except I don’t need a dream to make that call,
Sitting here, writing away, I can see you
Yet again, that much really isn’t that new
But the way you handled me is new,
You were hugging me and it was true
You hugged me out of worry and out of care
You did unlike others; you hugged instead of stared
Acted like you really new who I am and why
It is I really want to let go of it all and die
You knew how you were to handle me
And clear up my life, so it’s easier to see
I love you, but I know none of it’s true
And yet again, this is not really new
It’s just all of my wishes and hopes
Wanting you to help me be able to cope
But it’s just my mind playing games with me
My mind doesn’t care that I can never be free
It just likes to play with my little heart,
Tear my heart to shreds and tear it apart
It was all just a game and a dream
Now I’m going to go to a stream
And drown myself and kill my pains
And get rid of these tear stains
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Re: Dreaming of You
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by sandypoet on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 08:41:34 PM AEST
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| I think you have a beautiful poem here. dreaming about the one you love loviging you back and it was beautiful. then it became a reality what you dreamed was just that a dream.. and your sad because it was only a dream. now instead of going to the stream and drowning.. send the one you love this poem.. make a happy ending... |
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Re: Dreaming of You
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 09:07:58 PM AEST
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I don't find the write to be confusing Sprints...just your feelings for this guy : )
Nice love write ; P
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Re: Dreaming of You
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by brew on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 10:26:54 PM AEST
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confused yet deep inner feelings. We all have those.and yes they can conuse and hurt. Good write. but keep the dreams, and make them happier...............try to dream for hope and love, and not the bad......
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