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I remember you.
Contributed by
Brandyx7
on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 07:06:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Slow steps to the above
reveal with a pull
an open box,
the deepest breath.
Cardboard and dust swarm.
One breath in, slow exhale brings
you back to me in a printed picture
placed in frame of time of mind,
of mine.
I remember you, unrestrained
obstinate.
You slide into my head--
with that always-consistent smile,
so as not to scream, to whimper, breathe.
Lungs fill quickly with dust,
two gates--eyelids strangling tears,
I hold
my breath and your picture.
Copyright ©
Brandyx7
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2005-09-13 19:06:44]
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Re: I remember you.
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by LadyBo on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 10:51:18 AM AEST
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| I love this write...I feel the sadness. It makes me ache just to read it. I could read it over and over. |
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Re: I remember you.
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 09:26:40 PM AEST
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this beautifull brandy very warm nice feeling it gives me . . .
(((((((Brandy)))))))
Ben |
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