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Plea
Contributed by
Poet_of_anger
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Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 06:19:41 PM in AEST
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Do you
Realize
Your lies
That hypnotize
Your life
Streams of
Unconsciousness
Bringing a mess
Of bliss
I guess
Do you want me
Or am I hindering
You
There was
Truth before
Outside your door
It was for
Just you
Could you
Not see
Not believe
It was free
For you
Do you want me
Or am I hindering
You
There were
Glory days
Now betrayed
Thrown away
Forgotten
Cursed is
The blessed past
That couldn't last
Even masked
Forgotten
Do you want me
Or I am hindering
You
And you may say that it's alright
Forgiven is that wretched night
But it isn't quite alright
With me
Don't sell your emotions short
They are worth so much more
Quiet now don't retort
I plead
Let me be
Let me be
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Poet_of_anger
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2005-09-13 18:19:41]
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Re: Plea
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by WAE on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 06:27:26 PM AEST
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Some lines aren't clear to me but overall it's okay...
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Re: Plea
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 05:57:07 AM AEST
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Songwriting is more about the music than lyrical insight.
I don't think this is very interesting, caught as it is, between abstraction and nonsense ('there was truth before' ~ 'forgiven is that wretched night') but who knows? You may have a No.1 hit melody behind it - that's why the appeal of lyrics are such a mystery to me . . .
Keep writing,
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