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Within The Embers Of My Heart...
Contributed by
eternal_dreamer
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Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 05:54:40 PM in AEST
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Love had gone and turned its back
Leaving me with a heavy burdened heart
Burning tears masqueraded ritually
With each drop a new would start
When I thought I had lost it all
You made your way to me
But I could not bear another scar
So I pleaded with you to let me be
With each day you hung on to the hope
That maybe I'd change my mind
Emotions of love started to stir
One's I thought I'd left behind
I was slowly starting to fall
So deep in love with you
My heart would flutter, my hands would sweat
Could these feelings I feel be true?
Within the embers of my heart
Love once again shone through
I thought that all was lost
Until I found true love with you...
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Re: Within The Embers Of My Heart...
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 06:05:29 PM AEST
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Good for you Sue, and I am so happy for you! I like the positive feelings in this write, and it is so true...Just when you stop looking for love, it finds you.
Very nice job with this.
Scorp. |
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Re: Within The Embers Of My Heart...
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by poet_of_anger on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 06:22:10 PM AEST
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| Through the darkness one often finds light, yes and very true. Good emotion as well as choice of wording. |
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Re: Within The Embers Of My Heart...
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by Doriens_Picture on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 07:56:52 PM AEST
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| such a lovely poem and ember is one of my fav words |
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Re: Within The Embers Of My Heart...
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by Chubs on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 08:00:13 PM AEST
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| great poem and i can relate as well. |
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Re: Within The Embers Of My Heart...
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by brew on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 08:48:58 PM AEST
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WONDERFUL...........See someone do heed to what is out there and the paths that are there. I just know , it doesnt always happen for all, but why not see if it can.!
Brew~ |
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Re: Within The Embers Of My Heart...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 08:02:58 AM AEST
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| beautiful poem from a beautiful poet , your heart shone through this Sue ,,I loved it... |
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Re: Within The Embers Of My Heart...
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 10:44:52 PM AEST
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Sue,
Your bravery has paid off..lol
I'm elated that you've found happiness my friend-
You of all, deserve it-
Good for you!!
Many wishes for much happiness and for a very, very long time indeed!!
As Always,
B |
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Re: Within The Embers Of My Heart...
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 11:35:49 PM AEST
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What beautifully thrilling news, my sweet friend. I am delighted to hear this. Wishing you much happiness, my dear, always.
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: Within The Embers Of My Heart...
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by Archie on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 07:05:17 PM AEST
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| This is good. Usually embers reflect a dying love or a love that is barely hanging on. I like your version of it |
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Re: Within The Embers Of My Heart...
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 08:49:06 AM AEST
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I knew it! Again your heart is warmed by the sweetest flame. May this one never subside.
Take care, my friend, and cheers!
David |
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 02:15:57 AM AEST
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This poem is a natural piece of pure love, I can feel it, you left your heart prints on it... I am happy Sue..you are such a loving person, I pray you get all the love you deserve...I certainly love you my friend..
Huggs, and huggs, and wish I could hug and kiss you in person, instead of finger kisses..from my keyboard..
Raquel Leah :D |
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 10:12:02 AM AEST
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| Your poems are just awesome. I can't say enough...Mike |
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Re: Within The Embers Of My Heart...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 07:01:41 PM AEST
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aw susie Q. What a piece of perfect, poetic perfection!
Such a sweet write. I realize this is old, but I hope the
sentiments expressed here are still alive in your heart
dear friend. You truly deserve to be loved completely !
Through everything - my heart to yours, sweetie . .
love ya! *hugs*
~Breezy |
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Re: Within The Embers Of My Heart...
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by Lilly-Quill on
Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 08:47:37 PM AEST
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Slowest is True-love’s blossoms, to grow by far the strongest within Wisdom's realm, to frame.
What an great sentiment of love journey “revived for a better start,” dearest Susie Q, and a better life to gain.
Your admiring fan/ friend.
~Lilly-Quill |
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Re: Within The Embers Of My Heart...
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 8th September 2008 @ 03:48:21 AM AEST
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gently penned beauty, an absolute pleasure to read which makes the heart smile...
hugs n' love nessa |
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