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Untitled #1
Contributed by
nail-to-the-head
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Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 05:21:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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As the feeling grows inside,
Expanding past the bounds,
The blades cut deep into my soul,
And take away the last of my pride,
A mist of red takes over,
Blinded by hate I walk with you in mind,
Unsure of what will happen,
Yet surten that I will find you,
I scan every possible place,
You have done this too me,
You deserve everything you get,
Unloved, lonely, lost and hurt,
You left me too many times,
I will make you suffer,
I will make you feel the pain,
The pain that I carry everyday,
And yet,
You will never know how much you hurt me,
Over and over,
Everytime you leave me.
13.09.05
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Re: Untitled #1
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by poet_of_anger on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 06:27:49 PM AEST
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| A lot of anger, sometimes it is best to move on... not that anger is bad, it just seems helpless anger because it is part of a cycle perhaps? Maybe i am wrong. |
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Re: Untitled #1
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by Chubs on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 08:03:05 PM AEST
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| it seems that you need to relaxe. i've been in that situation many a times. you just got to endure it for now. overall good poem. |
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