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One last kiss
Contributed by
kolbrun
on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I hold this knife in my hand,
and wonder to myself, how much can i stand?
And the people here treat me like dirt,
they spit on me and make me hurt.
My only joy in life has left me here,
his name was Einar, and he died last year.
I put the knife to my throat,
as my life becomes a sinking boat.
I can sense the end coming near,
yet I'm so sad I can't shed a tear.
I see the light beginning to fade,
and I think to myself I should have prayed.
I tell you now I don't know why I chose this --
But do me a favor, and give the world on last kiss.
Copyright ©
kolbrun
... [
2003-01-17 01:00:00]
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Re: One last kiss
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 03:34:43 AM AEST
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Wow... I don't really know what to say to this. I loved this so much though. I can relate to it a lot and this poem tore me apart inside.
yet I'm so sad I can't shed a tear.
That line was just wow spoke to me a lot I enjoyed this so much. Keep yer chin up.
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Re: One last kiss
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by riverofwords on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 06:02:40 AM AEST
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this is another awesome write
i dont know if there was a life experience involved in this
but very strong ..very emotive
and wants the reader to try to help ...too late perhaps
very talented writing
peace be your journey
terry |
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Re: One last kiss
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by ke on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 07:30:04 AM AEST
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| wow...so much is said here....I have heard this before....your work is well done....take care.... |
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Re: One last kiss
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 07:31:04 AM AEST
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Very well written I pray this is "only" a poem.
I could feel your pain and emptiness...hang on it will get better.
Great write my friend,
the anonymous |
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