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Angry Rage
Contributed by
lil_boo
on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 02:42:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Every night they start to fight,
She know's somethings not right.
They can never get along,
To him everything she does is wrong.
One night he was at the bar,
He came home, it went to far.
The fighting, and yelling he wouldn't stop,
To the floor, she would drop.
Behind bar's is where he'll stay,
He will look back on that day.
All the thoughts go through his head,
The one he loved, is now dead.
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2005-09-13 14:42:13]
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Re: Angry Rage
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by WAE on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 03:00:46 PM AEST
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| Well, tragic story. No comments on writing. |
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Re: Angry Rage
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by allowanceofthoughts on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 04:13:21 PM AEST
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| That was very well written. I love the tragedy. Sad, but oh so true. Nicely Done! |
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