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Silly World
Contributed by
WAE
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Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 02:26:36 PM in AEST
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A silly world
Where people are tools
Full of greed
And silly rules.
Silly music
And silly dances
Silly eyes
And silly glances
Silly politicians
With their silly wars
Silly public silence
It can't be any worse.
Silly is this world
And silly who I am
Being so pathetic,
Being a silly lamb.
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WAE
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2005-09-13 14:26:36]
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Re: Silly World
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by allowanceofthoughts on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 04:14:56 PM AEST
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| That was quick and brilliant. Nicely Done! |
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Re: Silly World
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 04:21:27 PM AEST
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I think more sick and sad than silly. The words are flat and leave the poem without emotion.
Blessings,
Rita |
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Re: Silly World
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by gwenevere on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 04:36:08 PM AEST
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| So don't be a lamb, be a lion.Not everything in this world is silly.I agree war and greed are very silly, but there is also a lot of beauty and love, Ros |
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