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Beautiful Dreamer
Contributed by
anitajames
on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 10:30:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I dreamed of a land in mist
clouded by hope and longing.
I looked in the mirror there
and saw myself young and beautiful.
Full of wonder, hope, and excitement.
Everyday since
the mist slowly evaporates
leaving the reflection of a different dream.
The face looking back at me is sad,
sullen, and gray.
What happened to me?
How did I get this way?
I once dreamed of love.
I once owned innocence.
I was once that beautiful dreamer.
That was yesterday.
Copyright ©
anitajames
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2005-09-13 10:30:23] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Beautiful Dreamer
(User Rating: 1 ) by remote on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 09:00:39 AM AEST (User
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Good write. |
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Re: Beautiful Dreamer
(User Rating: 1 ) by candysears on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 08:13:42 PM AEST (User
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Very good a little sad but
good.
God Bless! |
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Re: Beautiful Dreamer
(User Rating: 1 ) by Elayner27 on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 09:06:57 PM AEST (User
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Wow that's beautiful. I love the land of mist. I have a thing with mist and mystical stuff. I also really liked the ending.
Elayna
(These tears are revealing what this *smile* hid) |
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Re: Beautiful Dreamer
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wachumiri on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 07:31:07 AM AEST (User
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Well written.... I too struggle with such thoughts. The crossroads before me, though, and I stand still.
Take care.
David |
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