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Sex
Contributed by
anitajames
on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 10:00:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Sex is my escape.
I crave it, I take it, I break.
Release from this life
is what it gives me.
I read it, I watch it, I taste it,
I flee.
Sensations move my body
and cloud my weary mind.
Please take me, I beg you
but do take your time.
I know its not healthy
to dull pain this way,
but I need it. I feel it,
something else but dismay.
Mouths open to kisses
lust clenched in my teeth.
I yield to it and taste his sweet sigh.
I love him, he loves me.
There is no lie.
This drug is healthier than any you've tried.
Copyright ©
anitajames
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2005-09-13 10:00:41]
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Re: Sex
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by allowanceofthoughts on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 04:42:52 PM AEST
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| Wow. Descriptive and very good. Makes you long for something I've never had...SEX! Nicely Done! |
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Re: Sex
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by AshRayne on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 08:06:49 PM AEST
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Me being 14 i cannot say that i have felt this sensation. could you believe that i am 14? so sad thought that people my age already have indulged themselves in this. wonderfully descriptive, making me feel what you write, congrats, and keep it up.
Exquisite writing that is your gift, be blessed, for you are perfection
~Ash |
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Re: Sex
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by remote on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 09:01:02 AM AEST
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| Loved the honesty of this poem. |
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Re: Sex
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 07:28:25 AM AEST
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Well written, no argument there, but anything that doen't last can never be an escape. I can't verify your observations for I've not experienced, so I will leave it at that. Still, great write.
Take care.
David |
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