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Longing for Her
Contributed by
sride686
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Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 06:59:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I feel my death as it creeps so near
Pain in my heart for I wish you were here
Weaker I grow with out you here
I need you my love to hold me dear
Can love bring death I ask myself
To hurt so much that in life you can not dwell
Some times I feel like I have nothing left
Without you here what do I have left?
My hurt goes out with never ending pain
I sleep at night and call out your name
Darkness begins to seep
As my depression begins to grow deep
Lost in my mind with thoughts of you
When will I return to be with you?
Left here alone I begin to sweat
I feel my life as I’m dripping wet
Dripping wet as I feel my blood flow
Faster and faster as my life starts to go
What is the plan for all this pain
Why must my life this love have to claim
Its claimed my heart and my soul
I’ve lost my mind as I fall down this hole
This pit of longing for this love that I need
I’ve hit the bottom as my heart starts to bleed
Left here to die and suffer in grief
No answer from God my thoughts are to weak
I need to return and get out of this place
And feel her soft kiss upon my face
Love so dark but sweat and cold
I love this love that makes me whole
~Steve~
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sride686
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Re: Longing for Her
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 08:41:04 AM AEST
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beautiful poem steve nice flow and effective expressions of emotions, wish u well . . .
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Re: Longing for Her
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by sprinter27 on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 09:16:57 PM AEST
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awww... steve, hang in there! you'll be with her soon. but good write, i hope she sees this and knows how much you love and care about her... just hang in there for her, she needs you to! just take care of yourself, and i wish you luck to hang in there. great write, keep it up!
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Re: Longing for Her
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by Archie on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 09:10:58 AM AEST
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| You will see your love again. Do not give up! |
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Re: Longing for Her
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 02:10:07 PM AEST
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that poem had a nice flow to it
it made my heart warm
even though you arent able to see her
i think it reminded me of my girlfriend
she is gone
and i long for her too
that was a beautiful write
it made me cry
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Re: Longing for Her
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by LolaWhite on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 02:30:37 PM AEST
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I love your words of love for me. Soon you will be home and in my arms where you belong. I miss you terribly and I love your great expressions of emotion. I feel your heart ache and your pain my love.
I need to return and get out of this place
And feel her soft kiss upon my face
Love so dark but sweat and cold
I love this love that makes me whole
I love this love that makes me whole too. Keep writing and sharing your talent with me and the world. I love you.
Lea-Ann |
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