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you did what ??

Contributed by hopefades on Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 02:16:18 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



he sits there by the phone
waiting for his hand to press the numbers
just get it over with

it will make her get mad
it will make her get sad

it will make her scream
to her death is better
at least that is what it will seem

you did it and now you have to tell her
because the thought keep playing over and over again

you wanted the feelings and you couldnt wait
and the girl was so young that she couldnt even date

but you took advantedge
and now you have to tell the one you say you really love

it will make her get mad
it will make her get sad

it will make her scream
to her death is better
at least that is what it will seem

your hands are all sweaty and you talk into the phone
your lover listens as you tell her what happened

"im sorry baby" "i really am"
it get silent for a moment and she repeats what she heard

you had sex with a girl that cant even date
and now she is haveing a baby .. oh ya thats great

how the **** could you do that
you said you loved me
and you ****** a girl
that pretty much looked like she was 3

she was 12 how could you do that
you messed up her life
just to get that felling of pleasure

have a nice life ..oh and say hi to the baby





Copyright © hopefades ... [ 2005-09-13 02:16:18]
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Re: you did what ?? (User Rating: 1 )
by Aquaelius on Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 03:35:39 AM AEST
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Wow, that's... You did what?!!! Oh, that's messed up. I would say, "Thanks for sharing." But, that's really messed up... and a baby!!! What?!

Aq.


Re: you did what ?? (User Rating: 1 )
by tonydread on Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 05:37:49 AM AEST
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yo ur realy good




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