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A flower in late bloom
Contributed by
Mild_Tempest
on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 11:56:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Like the flowers in late bloom,
You stun me beyond thoughts.
You leave me speechless,
With the glee you’ve brought.
Like the streams in spring,
The melody it creates.
In my mind it resides,
Your tender touch it awaits.
In the moonlight I sit,
Memorizing your tender face.
Time feels stretched out,
Like I am lost in space.
Flowers turn beautiful,
When you’re in my mind.
Their delicate beauty,
I didn’t seem to find.
Into the sky I looked,
A pale flower I saw.
Only images of you,
Could my mind draw.
When we first met,
A moment I haven’t forgot.
In love I could find,
What happiness could not.
Copyright ©
Mild_Tempest
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2005-09-12 23:56:23]
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Re: A flower in late bloom
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 12:24:44 AM AEST
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Amazing sentiments.
Very relatable indeed, this one's a real beauty to read.
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Re: A flower in late bloom
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by Aquaelius on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 03:46:33 AM AEST
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I like flowers. But the most interesting part has got to be your ending:
"A moment I haven’t forgot.
In love I could find,
What happiness could not."
I like this part, a little cryptic, is it not? Yet Is love ot happy? Would flowers not bloom from butterfly kisses? Good share.
Aq.
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Re: A flower in late bloom
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 08:27:19 AM AEST
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absolutely beautiful!
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: A flower in late bloom
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 03:25:53 AM AEST
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| I really love the last stanza. Nice work! |
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Re: A flower in late bloom
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 09:27:51 PM AEST
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This is really beautiful...especially the last verse..
Jenni |
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