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Falling Apart
Contributed by
brokenfire77
on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 09:34:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The lost expression upon your
silken face tells me your soul,
The stress of your sadness I can
see has once again taken toll.
I’m sorry for asking why it
must be just his way,
Our lives falling a part and all I
do is beg you to stay.
You turn your back to my
pathetic unsteady frame,
I look at your love leaving me
behind and know who to blame.
I can’t stand the thought of you
leaving me,
You look me in the face with
a certain hate of degree.
I take your hands in mine and
hold them in my own,
I look into your eyes which
soften from cold stone.
You kiss me sweetly and say sorry
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brokenfire77
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2005-09-12 21:34:04]
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Re: Falling Apart
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 09:57:55 PM AEST
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| aww. I got a bittersweetness out of this. I enjoyed reading it. After fighting and seeing those eyes change back into love is just amazing. Good write. Thanks for sharing |
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Re: Falling Apart
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 09:59:57 PM AEST
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| Wow a very interesting poem, sometimes relationships have a way of working themselves out. But no relationship is every perfect, there is always problems that arise whether you want them to or not. *Rose* |
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Re: Falling Apart
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by anitajames on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 10:06:03 AM AEST
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| Lovely poem. I think you put into words beautifully the process of fighting and making up. |
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