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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 08:59:57 PM AEST
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An interesting myriad of different thoughts hitting you throughout this read.
You certainly created an entertaining style in this piece
Well done
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by Doriens_Picture on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 09:17:35 PM AEST
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i like it
but i think you put too much thought into your poem and try too hard
you should just let it flow
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by loragoeshollywood on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 09:37:07 PM AEST
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ughh.. i didnt even try i just wrote what came to my head..
i find that kind of rude or harsh., but okay...
im not writing to impress people im writing to clear my thoughts...
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