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The Wonderful Nasty
Contributed by
mangos
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Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 08:12:35 PM in AEST
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Things are strange
Now a dayz’
When it pours the rain stays
And the dance begins to take its shape
And so she is made
Where one door closes
A variety of propositions proposes
Ulterior motives
Waiting on your bed are a thousand fresh roses
Not a stem is bent
And so she is sent
Finger pointing
At me?
Butterflies of all shades set absolutely free
Are those your lips
Kissing on me?
Worries of loneliness set absolutely free
And so it is me
Creatures of habit
Hands that reak sexual havoc
Makes the electricity spark and static
Touches
The screams are emphatic
And the night becomes a classic
The chill makes the bone shake
Makes the earth quake
Inside the walls
Baked apple cake
A rush of a steep waterfall
There was nothing to fake
And so we dance
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Re: The Wonderful Nasty
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 08:24:06 PM AEST
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Awww good for you, your dry spell is over!
All the best.
Scorp : )
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Re: The Wonderful Nasty
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by loragoeshollywood on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 09:11:06 PM AEST
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worrrrrrrk it.
haahah.
nice way to sum it up in a poetic way..
-Lora :] |
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Re: The Wonderful Nasty
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 09:41:45 PM AEST
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Magnificent-
Great subtlty in the rhyme..
passionate and nobel..
Great write-
B |
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Re: The Wonderful Nasty
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by brew on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 11:21:04 PM AEST
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'and so we dance"..............now that says it all.........beautiful and romantic.........yes
Brew~ |
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Re: The Wonderful Nasty
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by GurLG0nEWr0ng on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 12:30:38 AM AEST
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| ewwwww...very nice :) |
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Re: The Wonderful Nasty
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 01:10:17 AM AEST
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Very steamy and very captivating , love it , although the title doesnt seem to mesh with the flair of this write
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Re: The Wonderful Nasty
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 01:21:02 AM AEST
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| Very interesting to say the least. Nice write. |
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Re: The Wonderful Nasty
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by MysticFireFairy on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 11:22:04 PM AEST
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Wow this is a good poem well written and very nice imagry you did a great job keep it up!
~ From Mystic~ |
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