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Butterfly
Contributed by
bubbletoes
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Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:52:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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i cant help but smile when i look at you.
i dont want to but i cant help it
i see the butterflies in my stomach,
in my dreams at night
theres one for every love ive ever had,
my stomachs full,..but all but one of those butterflys are black
i cant help but think about you when your not around
i dont want to but i cant help it
your butterfly is bright green,..the color of your eyes and your favorite color
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2005-09-12 19:52:20]
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Re: Butterfly
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 08:04:16 PM AEST
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Hmmm...my favourite colour is blue, so I guess that rules me out :P
Nice little poem about the beginnings of love. Keep up the writing, and welcome to YPDC!
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Re: Butterfly
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by Elayner27 on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 09:30:28 PM AEST
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That is such a preaty and cute poem. I love the picture I get with all the black butterflies and the one green, vibrant and beautiful butterfly fluttering in and out of the massive crowd. I liked it.
Elayna
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