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Stand Beside Me
Contributed by
Willofree
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Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:31:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Do not go before me, I may not follow
If you walk behind me, I may loose you
Walk beside me, so we may face life together
One step forward and two steps back
The dance of life quickens
The moments flow, passing us by
Like a merry-go -round
All clustered together and spinning and twirliing around
In one fluid and fleeting motion
The dance expands and evolves
The tempo from carefree to oblivion goes
Into the darkest and remote area we fall
Emerging from the expanse of darkness
A beacon of light, like a lighthouse, searching the night
Illuminating the darkness, and alleviating the fright
Clearlng a path through the unforeseen
Enmeshed in darkness to eternity
Our faith is our armor that guards and shields us
So little time in this fast pace and rhyme
As the whirlwind of life passes us by
Too little time for everything on our mind
One can only hope and pray
That our Lord and savior
Is by our side the whole way
Copyright ©
Willofree
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2005-09-12 19:31:22]
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Re: Stand Beside Me
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by Cupid on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:46:52 PM AEST
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Lovely, Willofree! Just LOVELY!
Only one thing. I think you meant to write 'If you walk behind me, I may LOSE you.' Not LOOSE you.
Other than that, I think the whole poem is FANTABULOUS! |
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Re: Stand Beside Me
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 08:02:40 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings:)
hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Stand Beside Me
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by Archie on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 09:22:44 PM AEST
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| Great write. I think you write with great clarity. I can relate to this very well. |
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Re: Stand Beside Me
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 12:06:44 AM AEST
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Great write, Will . Enjoyed this....
Jenni |
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Re: Stand Beside Me
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 12:35:46 AM AEST
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I'm sure this write will bring comfort to some readers...I like your use of visuals and symbolism in this piece. Well worded, good write!
Scorp. |
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Re: Stand Beside Me
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 12:40:45 AM AEST
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I also pray for the same thing...tis the only comfort one can have.
Wonderfully written poem, a real pleasure to read.
Im sure many people echo your thoughts. |
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Re: Stand Beside Me
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 05:41:08 PM AEST
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Will this was just outstanding, you've writen something so pure and true. I know a lof of people can relate to this poem.
This was just WOW!!!! Thanks for posting this.
Jane~ |
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