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Sustain
Contributed by
allowanceofthoughts
on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:22:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Your hand was there
When I thought no one cared
Your heart gave feeling
When I thought my life had no meaning
Your thoughtfulness overwhelmed me
When you said words that helped me to see
There is always a friend near
Even when you are full of fear
There is always someone that understands
Even when life hands you all its demands
There is always love every where you turn
Especially when that is the one thing you truly yearn
There is always….Even when….!
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2005-09-12 19:22:46]
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Re: Sustain
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by Pyrofungus on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:31:13 PM AEST
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inspirational....very nice. this poem just might make someones day better. infact i guarntee it will...good job...
please comment on my work too
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Re: Sustain
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:47:07 PM AEST
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wonderfully written, warm welcome to ypdc too:)
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Sustain
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by Loende on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 09:10:47 PM AEST
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This was really well done and quite charming. Keep up the good work!
Be well,
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