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just a shadow
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 04:13:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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i'm not real
nor whole
i no longer
have my soul
just a shadow
with no home
or anybody
i'm utterly alone
a ghost
invisable
there's no hope
i'll always be miserable
just a shadow
not the whole me
is how i'll remain
for eternity
Copyright ©
xXxmegsxXx
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2005-09-12 16:13:26]
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Re: just a shadow
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by theimaginationofluke on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 04:17:26 PM AEST
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it is really gd megs
i like it!!!!
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Re: just a shadow
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by Archie on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 04:26:40 PM AEST
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Life can't be that bad. If it was no one would say ant thing positive to you at all.
I hope you cheer up soon. |
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Re: just a shadow
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by WAE on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 05:12:05 PM AEST
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Well written...
Alex |
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Re: just a shadow
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by lostrelic on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 05:18:44 PM AEST
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| interesting write i hope life gets better |
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Re: just a shadow
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by allowanceofthoughts on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:31:54 PM AEST
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| I have had a day such as what you wrote. Nicely Done! |
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