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Soliloquey Of A Mouse
Contributed by
WAE
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Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 11:48:57 AM in AEST
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there is no need for silly hopes.
Neither do I ask for senseless faith.
This way I am freed from thinking and decision-making.
The pestilence of liberty won't crawl into my head
For I refuse to think of matters above my daily bread.
Yes, I am a man. A mere amd mortal ape who speaks.
So why should I waste my time exploring something and
Challenging the perils?
This is not for me! I leave it all to you,
O, daring snobs.
I grin at you for I am well aware
Your destiny is not so faqr from mine -
We - all will die...
So why?
And still, I hate you.
Copyright ©
WAE
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2005-09-12 11:48:57]
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Re: Soliloquey Of A Mouse
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 04:31:20 PM AEST
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A mouse? Or a man?
I failed to find the analogy/metaphor here. I think there really should be one, but it seems lost in the drudgery of antiquated English and rhetorical questioning.
Basically, I want you to grow a tail and squeak for me. Squeak something more interesting than a dirge directed against those with faith enough in the providence found in (mis)adventure?
Its all contrived, i'm afraid.
Keep writing,
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Re: Soliloquey Of A Mouse
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 05:16:15 PM AEST
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woa neptune thats alittle harsh .
I thought it was indeed pretty good write.my opinion anyways. |
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Re: Soliloquey Of A Mouse
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by WAE on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 05:28:01 PM AEST
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Hello,
I am sorry for typoes in this poem - my fault and I am ashamed.
This is not my personal opinion and view but an artistic speculations... However, I am ready to defend the point.
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Re: Soliloquey Of A Mouse
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 06:38:52 PM AEST
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Hmmm, well as there is no topic for this piece of (work) there is also no point that I see in its birth. Rather, a better than thou attitude that needs to be "sucked up."
It's crap,
Rita |
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Re: Soliloquey Of A Mouse
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by WAE on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 07:03:37 PM AEST
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Once again I have to defend my work and explain that this is an artistic experiment. If you don't like the content, I will be glad to listen to your point.
THanks... |
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