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Not To Writers
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WAE
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Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 11:39:30 AM in AEST
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Who is beyond every writing?
A beardless punk who's smiling?
A beautiful lady in red?
An old man, thoughtful and sad?
Reading a poem, line after line,
Haven't you thought, "This is me! This is mine!
This guy wrote exactly the same
What I would have! It drives me insane!"
Well, I am sorry, there is no one to blame -
The first takes all credits and fame.
Love and hate, struggle and peace:
All is at hand, you don't pay any fees.
This time someone was faster than you
Creating a piece, just out of blue.
Don't forget, someone has already taken a pen
And written first lines as well as he can.
So my friend, let me finish this verse
And invite you to the wordsmithes's universe.
Scratch your head, rack your brain,
Share with us your excitement or pain.
Good Luck!
P.S: Rhyme is forced. Meter is loose. Poem doesn't make any sense.
I know.
Copyright ©
WAE
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Re: Not To Writers
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 03:22:09 PM AEST
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Lol i think it makes perfect since.
And it Rhymes really well too.
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Re: Not To Writers
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 03:59:48 PM AEST
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*grins*
Hmmmm, rhyme does seem a little forced, but I always find that AABB always does seem that way.
Lol. The poem, I kinda like it. It's so crazy it makes it original. (I'm kidding, of course) Seriously though, I like the thoughts in the first stanza, and how it takes such a drastic change in the second one, yet it still makes sense, in a way.
Ok, I'm gonna stop there because now I'm making no sense.
Anyway, good poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Phil xxx
(Who is a sucky commenter :P)
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Re: Not To Writers
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 05:38:18 PM AEST
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i think this is beautifully written, a wonderful poem:)
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Not To Writers
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by TheWildBeliever on
Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 12:30:01 AM AEST
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| its very straight forward. not bad |
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