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Just passing from here
Contributed by
remote
on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 09:31:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Doing
The Work that I like to
When I want to
Many things there yet that I want to
going
Go see places
Not always what I want to
and When I want to
Sleeping
I close my eyes
This music sounds so good
I can be any place, I want to
Being
Just being myself
all the time
here and everywhere
Caring
Don't care really
for any hurt, I don't want to
I never mean to
Pausing
once in a while
Admire, the way everything seems
all the treasures around me
Stopping
Let the new beginings to catch up
Reflect, gather that I want to
map out to where I am going to.
Copyright ©
remote
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2005-09-12 09:31:21]
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Re: Just passing from here
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 09:35:28 AM AEST
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Interesting style, original and it allows for the reader to reflect and compare it to our own lives.
Is english your only language...I feel you know others as well... |
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Re: Just passing from here
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by Archie on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 09:49:31 AM AEST
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You make some really good points in your poem that cause the heart to pause for thought.
" Caring
Don't care really
for any hurt, I don't want to
I never mean to"
These lines were really striking to me as a person who tries to care. Your thoughts flowed fluently and with purpose and consitent theme. |
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Re: Just passing from here
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by WAE on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 04:21:33 PM AEST
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A nice approach. Self-inflicted Q and A...
Alex |
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Re: Just passing from here
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:00:57 PM AEST
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filled with peace and beauty:)
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Just passing from here
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 10:21:32 PM AEST
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It is unique in that it allowed me to make my own assumption line to line..
a bit vauge..I thought-
Good write.
B |
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Re: Just passing from here
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by remote on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 07:06:25 AM AEST
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There's a typo here, should be read as:
Going
Go see places
Not always where I want to
and when I want to |
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