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LOVE
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aashna
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Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 06:53:15 AM in AEST
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love,defining it in three simple words we get to know it is TRUST,SUPPORT,UNDERSTANDING.some lose their love some get their love.why do we lose our love?just a MISUNDERSTANDING or so.when we love we do lose someone but having TRUST is no more a lose.just close your eyes and you'll see the love of your life.just go on!LOVE IS LIFE!DONT LET YOUR LIFE GO ON!
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Re: LOVE
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by remote on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 05:00:20 PM AEST
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You need to work really hard and check all your spellings and grammar, here is the reworked poem of your without changing every word there. Change as you like and perhaps than you can submit it again. May be other poets here should have better suggestions to give too.
Love,
defining it in three simple words
TRUST,SUPPORT and UNDERSTANDING.
some lose their love
some get their love.
why do we lose our love?
just a MISUNDERSTANDING or so.
when we love we do lose someone
but having TRUST
is no more a loss.
Just close your eyes
and you'll see
the love of your life.
LOVE IS LIFE!
Don't lose your love! |
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Re: LOVE
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by Bhavna04 on
Monday, 6th February 2012 @ 03:56:13 AM AEST
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| beautiful...... |
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