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thief of the moment
Contributed by
edsel
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Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 05:05:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She was clad in the simplest earthliness
there were clouds beneath here feet
as she moved from here to there
roses bloom and angels meet
she moved a bit of her head to
my direction, and everything froze
it felt like sunshine in the rain
it tasted like bittersweet rose
suddenly i was ashamed of myself
she could see right thru my eyes
she could smell the secret beneath
and spell my vouched safe soul
with her, I'm naked as a careless fish
shimming in an unending sea of gladness
and uncertainty, it seems
like it's a dream.. it has always been
it has always been...
for this girl is living in sheets
klaxon-ed in blue and red
posted at the side of my bed
so it has always been...
..a dream
Copyright ©
edsel
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2005-09-12 05:05:27]
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Re: thief of the moment
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by Streamingdreams on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 05:18:46 AM AEST
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beautiful ! love the imagery!!!
good write...
cheers,
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Re: thief of the moment
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 05:21:21 AM AEST
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love the way you put your words...Hope "she" reads this...lol.
good lucks to ya'
cheers,
-glass |
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Re: thief of the moment
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:51:35 AM AEST
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What a lovely write...
"with her, I'm naked as a careless fish
shimming in an unending sea of gladness"
....captivating line, ya gotta love it.
The expression was simple and yet....bold.
Well done, this one's a winner! |
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