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Daddy

Contributed by Gigi_15 on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 12:47:15 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief



My father was murderd
4 years and 330 days ago
I hate not knowing how he died and how it all happend
I hate how everyone says bad things about him
I hate how he left me with so many un-answered questions
I hate how every year on 7th October I have to remember
That it's been +365 days more without him

I don't know how I survived it
But it's getting tougher and tougher
I'm missing him more and more
I wonder how it would be
If he was still here with me

I can't remember
How it is to have a dad
Everything is fading away
His voice, his face his smell
I can't remember anything at all
It makes me wanna tear down everything

I want him so bad
Even for just a minute
Just to tell him how much I miss him
And to ask him
If I'm still his baby girl

Daddy R.I.P.




Copyright © Gigi_15 ... [ 2005-09-12 00:47:15]
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Re: Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by hopefades on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 02:05:38 AM AEST
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omg im so sorry .... i dont even know what to say ..... IM sure he misses you too ...... lots of love

trina


Re: Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 02:57:08 AM AEST
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I'm so sorry for your loss.
Both my parents are deceased so I know how much u miss him.
hang tuff.
luv, huggs, prayers,
emy
Good writing even tho it's sad.


Re: Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by glassicallyunsuperficial on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 04:06:09 AM AEST
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your father, I'm sure is right beside you, whenever you need him.
I guess it is hard to lose someone and it's harder day by day....
hold on and be strong...
cheers,
-glass


Re: Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:30:01 AM AEST
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heart breaking, awesome write


Re: Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 09:05:24 PM AEST
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Fortunately both my parents are still with me, for which I feel blessed.
However, I know the pain of losing someone close and I think you captured those desperate feelings well

Steve


Re: Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by slogan on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 02:05:21 PM AEST
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excellent piece of writing..great job...jh




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