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Where love is lost, and life is lonely
Contributed by
AshRayne
on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 03:55:22 PM in AEST
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An icy wall,
Surrounds me,
Where love is lost,
And life is lonely.
I know I am the cause,
I made myself this way.
I allowed the fire to die,
Froze the ashes.
I allowed myself to falter,
To push you away farther.
And now within my darkness,
No warmth can I obtain.
Where love is lost,
And life is lonely.
~Ash Rayne
Inspired by Jen
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AshRayne
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2005-09-11 15:55:22]
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Re: Where love is lost, and life is lonely
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by NoangelNohope on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 05:16:02 PM AEST
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| gorgeous...absolutely gorgeous... |
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Re: Where love is lost, and life is lonely
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by Brandyx7 on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 08:41:02 PM AEST
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| Very good repeatation, it makes the reader get more of the feelings. And also excellant imagery. |
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Re: Where love is lost, and life is lonely
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by PrincessJen on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 09:17:54 PM AEST
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| I love your poem....It hits home...I am sorry that you are going through this...It's not easy especially alone. I read this book that really helped me when I went through this. It's called Fear is Letting Go of Love. I can't remember the author ....but this book helped me to move on and made me realize that you really can't love until you let go of fear. Remember, You can't feel love and fear at the same time. Good luck and take care.....Email me anytime you need a friend...I will always be here - Jen |
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Re: Where love is lost, and life is lonely
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by brew on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 10:37:52 PM AEST
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Very heart written write.......and Yes, as ppl we DO push when we shouldnt, and sometimes it cant be helped.! But, open the door, and keep trying........let your heart flow instead of shutting.
Brew~ |
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Re: Where love is lost, and life is lonely
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by brokenwings on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 02:20:26 AM AEST
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| not at all what i expected but hit home all the same, love is what will keep us alive, good write |
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Re: Where love is lost, and life is lonely
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 08:19:36 AM AEST
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this is beautiful.....
hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Where love is lost, and life is lonely
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by AshRayne on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 07:27:46 PM AEST
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| THANKS TO ALL WHO READ THIS! i really appreciate that you did, and im soo happy that this is one of my most popular. love you all! |
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