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The Terror That Lives Inside
Contributed by
HatchetGirl
on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 03:37:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I'm in its grasp
with its hands around my neck
it wants me to take my last breath
but giving in is just too easy
Fighting back seems simple
until it stops every attempt to move
it's reading my mind
I fear of no escape
I take a breath to clear my mind
it closes in, to take me away
I throw my arms around it and hold on tight
if I am going to die it's coming with me
Now it fears me
and it tries to push me away
I close my eyes in fear of what's next
I open my eyes......
.... and I'm the only one there
Copyright ©
HatchetGirl
... [
2005-09-11 15:37:39]
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Re: The Terror That Lives Inside
(User Rating: 1 )
by colinbaker62 on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 07:55:16 PM AEST
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A somewhat sombre poem, which was obviously the intention. Very good..
Before you become so good at dark poetry to the exclusion of all other forms, why not have a go at a funny one? Like a clerihew or a twongue tister or something..lol Keep writing girl !
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Re: The Terror That Lives Inside
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by russ-dawg on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 08:06:52 PM AEST
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| cool! it was a neat poem keep them coming! |
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