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Insomnia
Contributed by
gwenevere
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Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 01:44:14 PM in AEST
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In my dark and deep despair
No one here to even care
In this dark, satanic place
Heart a beating, pulses race
Cold sweat trickles down my spine
Feel the fetid air, the grime
Waiting for I know not who
Eyes wide open, stuck like glue
Dare not breathe, my throat on fire
Feel like scraping of barbed wire
Wish that I could look behind
To the horror in my mind
Every night Images creep
In my thoughts instead of sleep
Waiting here throughout the night
'Til sanity greets morning light
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2005-09-11 13:44:14]
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Re: Insomnia
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by remote on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 02:26:47 PM AEST
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| Quite well written work and you say you're not insomniac |
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Re: Insomnia
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by NoangelNohope on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 05:42:23 PM AEST
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| my best friend has insomina...sounds to me like you got it hands down... |
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Re: Insomnia
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by heartquake on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 07:04:24 PM AEST
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| great write... i have terrible insomnia... this is pretty much how it goes too.... usually for me though my mind races with lists, stuff i want to say to people, and anything else i can think of |
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Re: Insomnia
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by guiltycircles on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:34:05 AM AEST
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| nice write, u really captured it |
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Re: Insomnia
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 08:46:57 PM AEST
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I have a colleague at work who suffers from this.
From the things he has said, you seem to have captured the feelings of frustration he has to put up with daily.
Steve |
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Re: Insomnia
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 11:14:01 PM AEST
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I'm here Ros..
I'm here.
This was laden with too much pain for you-
I hope you are alright.
Just know I'm here.
Great pain-
Yours truly-
Billy |
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