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Who’s Really Being Punished Here?
Contributed by
PrincessJen
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Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 11:39:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I closed my eyes
And I felt you near
It was only for a moment-
I wiped a way a tear
I wanna forget yesterday
And look forward to tomorrow
It seems impossible-
I feel so empty and hollow
I pretend I’m okay….
Even force a smile
Too much has happened
The pain will burn for awhile
It would make things easier
If everyone would leave me alone
And understand that this is something
I must deal with on my own
No one really knows
What’s happened or what’s been said
His future is not in my hands
He made his own bed
But regardless of what happened
I can’t control my heart
I can’t wait to see him
And maybe have a fresh start
Only if he’s willing to get help
And really wants to change his ways
Who gives anyone the right
To decide how he pays
I’m the one who’s hurting
It’s me who can’t sleep at night
It’s not you who’s taking the risk
So back off……this isn’t your fight
What he did was wrong
But the judge is being a little rough
He’s already going to miss his daughters birth
Don’t you think that’s punishment enough?
So who’s really being punished here
Is it him or me?
I think we’ve both suffered enough
Washington…..Can’t you just let us be?
Copyright ©
PrincessJen
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2005-09-11 11:39:20]
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Re: Who’s Really Being Punished Here?
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by JenJen on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 02:52:25 PM AEST
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this is a sad emotional poem
all my wishes and hope for you
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Re: Who’s Really Being Punished Here?
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 06:13:49 AM AEST
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Deeply emotive write. You expressed your feelings well. As for the subject, I have been there, and in my experience, it doesn't get better...Nor does the violence go away. While I can understand you wanting to forgive him, and give him another try...especially since there is a child involved. I only hope you know what you're doing, and if it happens again---leave! Or else the answer to your question/title will be: YOU.
All the best.
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