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Star Of Life
Contributed by
gwenevere
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Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 06:24:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Listen to the Star Of Life, listen very well
Ask the Star your chosen path, she to you will tell
Ask her of your voyage, as you journey on
What will be your tempest, what will be your sun
Ask the Star to guide you, as you travel through
As she did the shepherds, she will do for you
Meditate and listen, she will tell the truth
She will help and guide you , to eternal youth
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Re: Star Of Life
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by remote on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 06:35:30 AM AEST
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| Nice start, but the last bit "eternal youth" - bad choice, reminds me of MJ. I am sure there is more to the quest in life than eternal youth. |
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Re: Star Of Life
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 04:23:25 PM AEST
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This is a truly lovely piece. I do believe in universal spirits and in my mind the universal youth you are speaking of would be the new earth of Heaven. Whatever the meaning, the poem is truly inspirational.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: Star Of Life
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by Archie on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 10:37:59 PM AEST
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| I think you have written a great poem. Some of the lines in the first stanza are a bit of a tongue twister, yet over all there is a great sense of profound wisdom at it's heart. |
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Re: Star Of Life
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 08:19:10 PM AEST
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lovely expression, beautiful poem:)
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Star Of Life
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 11:21:54 PM AEST
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Remote's not a bit on..
I loved it..
It was very telling..and very poetic Ros..
(great composition too)
Last two lines BEST!
Yours-
B |
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