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Murderous Rage
Contributed by
sride686
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Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 05:57:59 AM in AEST
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I race through the night
With fire they flame
The hate in my eyes
As my mind lives in pain
Hate in my soul
As my heart fades away
Ice on my breath
As my mind fills with pain
I question my heart
As I question my soul
And this murderous rage
That has taken control
I feel the reapers thoughts
And I feel the reapers grief
Intoxicating intuition of a killers deceit
Legends of death
Like a thief in the night
A force that completes me
Like the legends of life
Melancholy thoughts
In a heart filled with rage
The warm sent of blood
As my life my death claims
This legend of murder
Now a myth in my site
I welcome my death
For it gives me new life
In eternity find peace that wont die
~Steve~
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sride686
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Re: Murderous Rage
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by travisk on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 06:11:23 AM AEST
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nice and simple, I really liked it.
Good job Steve. |
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Re: Murderous Rage
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 02:24:03 PM AEST
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Certainly those thoughts have troubled every soldier over there. I hope and pray that when each of you come home that the feelings you had can be sorted through and discarded and you can fit back into your life without those thoughts being harboured in your mind. God bless you each and every one. Steve, stay strong and know that many of us do think of you everyday and appreciate the ungodly tasks of your service to your country.
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: Murderous Rage
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by shelby on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 05:08:17 PM AEST
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Steve Im sorry for the silence I do still have your address just having a few things going on here I havent forgotten you. Im praying for the day that your all back here at home.
This poem is beautiful to say the least you touched your emotions with each stroke of the pen
huge hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Murderous Rage
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:29:45 AM AEST
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Steve, this was so.... *ponders for a minute* poetically sad and the emotive content is just outstanding.
I just don't know what to say in this poem. It just makes me sad that our soldiers out there are dying for a war that we would never finish.
Good to see you back.
Hugs,
Jane~ |
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Re: Murderous Rage
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 03:17:53 PM AEST
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wow so sad .
I hope your doing ok?
love and hugs |
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Re: Murderous Rage
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:10:15 PM AEST
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chilling steve.... be careful over there:)
hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Murderous Rage
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:29:31 PM AEST
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wow thats astonishing
i love how it made me feel as though those were my own thoughts and feelings
a great poem
-->Rae |
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