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June 18th
Contributed by
ilhsa
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Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 11:09:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I was so happy that day I was turning 17 then my phone rang it was your sister she saaid yo got in a accedent I didn't belive her..... you lost your leg and you where bleeding from the brain.
tell me why you where too cool for a helmet? Your brain was being suffcated you where dying
I pryed for you to contue to breah then i went and saw you in the hosapital it was the worst thing ever
i walked into your room alone so i could deal with what i was about to see and i thought i had walked
into the wrong room you looked like a little boy not the 23 year old man that you are you looked so
helpless i held your hand and i talked to you trying to crack jokes that was really hard i started to cry
even though you where in a coma you could hear my sobs you started to winkle up your face i squeezed
your hand and i thought that nothing would get better.
but your a man of steel your your own superman your my hero your better already.
Copyright ©
ilhsa
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2005-09-10 23:09:53]
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Re: June 18th
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by BEBE on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 12:16:55 AM AEST
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Im very sorry. Some or most of these questions may never be answered,
very good write
GODBLESS you
Always
BEBE |
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Re: June 18th
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by heartquake on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 06:54:17 PM AEST
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| great write... sad and full of hope at the same time |
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