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Nauseous
Contributed by
mangos
on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 05:34:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Scatter the silence
Into fragments
Until music is heard
Until the exact chord
The exact word
Is uttered
Hesitantly stuttered
I love you
Was faintly muttered
Now what am I supposed to do with all this silence
Did you expect to slit my wrist
To sleep the days away unconscious
Drug myself into easing numbness
Appeasing nothingness
Pass in and out of reality
Craziness
Your body felt like bliss
Everything was perked up
No flimsiness
Everything got soaked up
What a mess
Horrendous
Oh how I have ached for this
Used to playing the pacifist
Now an aggressor
The witty antagonist
Seeking the pleasures which cause pain
A beneficiary of a masochist
In the obituary jot down my last name
Weary of my own brain
The impulses one is not meant to resist
Or refrain
From
Experiment
Let loose a clenched fist
And relax the temperament
Scatter the silence
So that a voice become imminent
Significant
With love
And not an ounce of resentment
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Copyright ©
mangos
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Re: Nauseous
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 07:22:07 PM AEST
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| this is a really good poem...i like it alot...keep it up |
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Re: Nauseous
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 10:09:29 AM AEST
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| Very well done. Thoroughly enjoyed reading this. |
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Re: Nauseous
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 01:23:37 PM AEST
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I like the sombre type beginning to this, and the thought of scattering the silence. Sometimes it does feel like you could reach out and touch it. Then from the second stanza on, you just go all out, your fast flowing words delivered with your trademark wit! Excellent write, I love it when you let loose like this. Well done.
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Re: Nauseous
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by miss_jules on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 02:03:19 AM AEST
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| This poem has a fantastic rhythm to it... it reminds me of beat poetry or slam poetry. I like it a lot. |
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