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Mom you said......
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
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Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
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Mom,
You said youd always be around,
But you are gone,
You said you would stay with me,
but you were wrong,
You use to tell me sweet stories,
I so loved to hear,
You use to tell me of your past,
that always gave me tears,
You told me I had a special gift,
that I could never see,
You said this would bring me happiness,
for the rest of eternity,
You told me mom, you were ready to go,
But I needed you to stay,
your pain on Earth hurt you so,
I can remember those days,
You promised I will be cared for,
all my worries will pass,
You gave me a smile & closed your eyes,
How I want that moment to last,
Mom, I know where you are,
Its a place I will some time be,
I know the place is far,
but in my dreams I can see,
I will forever take what youve given me,
and share it with the ones I love,
For your words I cherish ever more,
How lucky is God above!
Copyright ©
LOWMAN613
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2003-01-16 18:00:00]
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Re: Mom you said......
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 06:09:23 PM AEST
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A TREASURE OF A POEM!!!!!
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Re: Mom you said......
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by nomad on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 06:33:07 PM AEST
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| A beautiful tribute and thank-you to your mom, LOWMAN. I wish I'd been able to write something as lovely as this piece for my mom. I believe somehow she is smiling with joy from this piece. |
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Re: Mom you said......
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by OreO on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 06:34:29 PM AEST
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But Christina....she did stay with you....her image rests in your heart that you so share lovely with the world to see....have you ever caught yourself saying things to your children that you remember your mother saying to you...she lives on...inside of you..and she was right...you do have a special gift....one which i see is to be able to touch a world of hearts beyond your reach and cause tears to fall..down upon their cheeks...please dont cry...your an angel...and angel's they fly high...
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Re: Mom you said......
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by spooky on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 08:56:25 PM AEST
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| she isnt gone,,,as long as you loved her she is not gone ,,she is still in your heart forever,,your friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: Mom you said......
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 05:21:07 PM AEST
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| Christina, my heart breaks as I read this, your mom is watching, you have a beautiful spirit, and like your mom said, you will be given a gift to last for eternity, hold your head up high, and don't let others walk on you, thanks for the wonderful write |
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Re: Mom you said......
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 06:57:54 PM AEST
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made me cry...
Sharon |
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Re: Mom you said......
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by MaMort on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 07:26:55 PM AEST
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| omg, I cried when I read it. My mum is exactly like that, she's kind and wise and event hough she's still here, I know she'll be gone one day and I couldn't stand that. Great write! |
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