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Come Back to Me
Contributed by
RAGEyourDREAM
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Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 02:27:22 PM in AEST
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So hard not to think about it
It's every step I take
And heaven knows I'm trying
But it gets awfully hard
When your heart is this broken
Visions of your lovely face
As I awake, I have this feeling
That you're here and beside me
How silly of me, I know
All the pain will go away
So I say it, here I am again
I gotta face another day
I'm so tired, I need you once again (oh baby)
How am I suppose to carry on,
I find myself singing the same old song
If you hear me, have it in your heart
But please come back to me (oh baby)
I'll be right here if you need someone
If you hold another I'll be moving on
As easy as said
Just hope that I can see the road
Oh how it's been so long
It seems a lifetime passed
These memories that linger,
Soon as I think they have gone
They've only gotten stronger
And so I'm getting through a day
But every move was made was always you and I together
It's hard to believe Im lonely
Is there gonna be a day
I can see the word to make me better
I know there has to be a way
So if you listen and hear me out oh, baby
How am I suppose to carry on,
I find myself singing the same old song
If you hear me, have it in your heart
But please come back to me (oh baby)
I'll be right here if you need someone
If you hold another I'll be moving on
As easy as said
Just hope that I can see the road
You're one in a million,
Dunno how we got so wrong
I thought it was so simple then
Now I know, now I know, how it goes
To let it go
Can there be a chance for you and I?
Before I really make up my mind
Oh how I miss you
I never would kiss you
I'm speaking it from my heart
How am I supposed to carry on,
I find myself singing the same old song
If you hear me, have it in you heart
I'll be right here if you need someone
If you hold another I'll be moving on
Just hope that I can see the road
Come back to me baby
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Re: Come Back to Me
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by WAE on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 03:35:48 PM AEST
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| I would consider more work on this song. |
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Re: Come Back to Me
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by Archie on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 08:02:35 PM AEST
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This song expresses a lot of feeling but something is missing. There is no driving rhythym for the reader to follow. Consider the words to this song by one of my favorite artists.
"When we use to say good night
I'd ofetn kiss and hold you tight
but lately you don't seem to care
you close the door and leave me
standing there
oh honey that's not fair
That's it
I quit
I'm moving on"
I hope this helps. |
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Re: Come Back to Me
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by remote on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 05:28:21 AM AEST
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| With all these words all you are conveying is "come back" there has to be more convincing arguements in few words to hold attention. |
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Re: Come Back to Me
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by just-b on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 07:54:55 AM AEST
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| nice write! definitely from the heart and coming from a place we all have been |
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