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<3your mango summer memory<3
Contributed by
loragoeshollywood
on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 12:13:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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heart throb, v.i.n.d.i.c.a.t.i.o.n
im reaching for you
SSSSSSSTTTTTTTTTRRRRRRRRRREEEEETCHING
to that place where you are.
im yearning,lusting,longing for our bodies to lay together.
2 LUSTFUL LOVERS but no one will say the word.
im begging for your embrace
to feel your honey golden locks
and your tender warm skin,
see your vibrant,mysterious BLUE eyes.
OUR lips need to meet again..its been too long.
remember the lucious taste of mangos & strawberries?
My Chapstick.
Wasnt it tasteful? cant we be that way again?
our long hugs while we lay across my bed
cant you come back to me.
i need you to lift me up again
I WANT you to call me
E-V-E-R-Y morning & E-V-E-R-Y night.
your the first thing i think of, and my last memory.
we watched the sun set together and slep on the beach
ONE sleeping bag; 2 BODIES
the warmth of lovers.
"instead of starting a fire we should be heating things up"
THE heat was
L
E
A
V
I
N
G though.
all of the cars packed and dismissed.
fences lined with swim trunks and bikinis.
sandles on porch steps; covered in sand*
the summer was over.
YOU LEFT,..
my favorite flavors are mango and strawberry you know?
you are my last thought and favorite memory.
BUT PLEASE:
dont wash me away like fate of some summer fling.
your my ~warm~ mango summer
and my strawberry memory**
your gone and i'll just sit here where this all took place.
thinking of you and your warm golden face.
think of me when (you eat mangos)
think of me when(you drink strawberry smoothies)
think if me when(you let her play w/ your golden locks)
think of me when(you touch her like you did me)
think of me when(you get sand in your shoes)
think of me when(you sleep on the beach)
think of me when(you share long meaningful hugs)
AND REMEMBER ME AND YOU
and i hope it makes you as
CCCCCCCCC
RRRRRRRR
AAAAAAAA
ZZZZZZZZZz
YYYYYYYYYY
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
as it makes me.
but whatever you do.
dont tell her you love her, like how you said it to me.
because those are MY MEMORIES
and my favorite night.
please come back next summer.
- LOOOORAaa
Copyright ©
loragoeshollywood
... [
2005-09-10 12:13:37] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: <3your mango summer memory<3
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 07:37:50 PM AEST (User
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this is a very good poem...it sux when you have all these great memories of some one and then they have to leave you...im sorry that had to happen to you..i hope he comes bak to you next summer...great write keep it up |
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Re: <3your mango summer memory<3
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spike on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 04:50:42 AM AEST (User
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Well structured, very controlled and strong, genuine emotions. Very creative/imaginative, fun to read, flows well. I've read your other postings too. Ask the moderator to spell check - it does distract a bit from the poems.
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