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Sacrifice
Contributed by
Colaalone
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Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 11:12:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I rip my emotions
From the fathomless pit
Of my empty, hollowed chest.
Dripping depression,
Paranoia and obsession,
They’re packaged and sold
For the pleasure and amusement,
Of society’s unsatiable desires.
I'm left dead and unwanted,
Pushed away and abandoned.
Uncaring of my fate,
I slowly rot away into indifference.
Copyright ©
Colaalone
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2005-09-10 11:12:23]
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Re: Sacrifice
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 11:47:13 AM AEST
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Ohh Wow, that was just perfection. I totally understand what you were trying to say.
I feel this poem and I thank you for sharing it.
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Jane~ |
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Re: Sacrifice
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 12:48:16 PM AEST
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Social lack of concern for others is a big problem in this world. We are so so politically correct that we deprive ourselves of feelings necessary for the want to live. we drain life of happiness and desire. We cut others to the bone to be on top, never caring in the least we tear their lives apart. Even our own children. Great write, albeit depressingly sad.
Rita |
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Re: Sacrifice
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by WAE on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 04:00:14 PM AEST
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Nice content, though it doesn't flow.
Best wishes,
Alex |
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Re: Sacrifice
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by just-b on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 08:03:18 AM AEST
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| society is not always to blame for such sadness and depression yes it can be an abysmal place but.. we to have to learn how to adapt and become more then a statistic. great write of emotion ! |
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