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no more falling at your feet
Contributed by
loopylou
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Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 10:38:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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no more falling at your feet
it's just the way things have got to be
no more knocking on your door
no more waiting in the rain anymore
too many years
too many opportunities have flown by
and you mess them up
everytime
apologies and regrets
but you make the same mistakes
over and over again
don't ever say i walked away because i didn't care
don't ever say i was never there
i can't make you love me
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loopylou
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2005-09-10 10:38:57]
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Re: no more falling at your feet
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 08:09:29 PM AEST
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| i no whats it like to fall for some one over and over again and all they do is hurt you...its hard but sometimes you just have to move on...this is a really good poem...keep it up |
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Re: no more falling at your feet
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 12:12:53 PM AEST
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Good, honest, and heartfelt emotion in this write. I really like the fourth stanza and the last line best. Nice job!
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Re: no more falling at your feet
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 25th January 2019 @ 03:38:15 AM AEST
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| So true! I think we all have one of those. |
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