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Broken
Contributed by
PrincessJen
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Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 09:11:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Alone, Broken hearted, and unsure of what the future holds
I just sit and watch as my life unfolds
Lost and confused -
Where do I go from here
Free atlast.....yet I still live in fear
My minds cluttered with emotional clouds
Driving me crazy from those guilty sounds
Barely able to get about
Ignoring persistant thoughts of doubt
Constant reminders that what I'm doing is right
For I'm leaving the darkness....and I'm searching for the light
Hoping my conscience will let me sleep at night
Pressured by everyone and everything
All of their feelings and thoughts on my mind.... they just cling
While everyone Wonders whether or not justice will sing
But what they just dont understand is that in the end
It's my heart thats broken....It's my heart that will never mend
Copyright ©
PrincessJen
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2005-09-10 09:11:42]
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Re: Broken
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by justme03 on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 10:40:50 AM AEST
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| this is an awesome way of expressing your thoughts and feelings. love the way u described it all. i wish u the best thru this. *hugs* |
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Re: Broken
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by Randyjohnson on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 10:55:16 AM AEST
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| A person I know was a victim of domestic violence also. This is a great poem. |
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Re: Broken
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 11:10:15 AM AEST
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How terribly sad. The poetic content of this piece was just sensational.
Thank you for sharing such a beautiful sad piece.
Jane~
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Re: Broken
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by Ivy on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 11:44:11 AM AEST
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lovely write. I wish that everythings becomes allright and I know how much ever all of us tell u that things will be fine, it is u r heart that is broken which breaks one as a person in turn. But keep the will to hold on and get out of this mess. I am sure things will be fine.
if u want to talk to me mail me at vidya35@rediffmail.com. we can be friends
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Re: Broken
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by shelby on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 07:30:31 PM AEST
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you captured your heart well with this poem.
you have done the right thing and I know exactly where your coming from. (Everyone) thinks they know better for you you do what you need to do to mend and heal and find sunshine and rainbows dont let anyone tell you any different
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