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I Touch
Contributed by
mrpeanut64
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Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 02:43:37 AM in AEST
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I touch, yet cannot feel
I hurt, and will not heal
I cry, but comes no tear
I scream, but none will hear
I try, but trying’s tough
I give, but its not enough
I long, but love is rare
I die, and none will care
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Re: I Touch
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 04:22:11 AM AEST
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| You know, I really love the poems that are short and simple, but yet so powerful at the same time. I love this write a lot and I thank you for sharing with us. Nice work. |
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Re: I Touch
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by lulu4u on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 04:57:58 AM AEST
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| A short, but nonetheless sophisticated poem! Superb. |
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Re: I Touch
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by mylady on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 06:34:07 AM AEST
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| I like it... |
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Re: I Touch
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by loopylou on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 08:55:47 AM AEST
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| I like this poem, i think lots of people can relate to it |
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Re: I Touch
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 11:04:30 AM AEST
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Now thats what a call a poem. It was short and written so nicely.
I just love the way you wrote this. It's just WOW!!!!
Jane ^_^ |
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Re: I Touch
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 01:04:59 PM AEST
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Wow, I have been there before and it does feel exactly like that. But I did find out there is always someone that would care if you were not in their world, whether you realize it or not. Sorry for your pain. Hope things get better.
Rita |
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Re: I Touch
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by candysears on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 09:51:56 PM AEST
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This is very touching.
But beautiful..
God Bless |
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Re: I Touch
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by Ambivalence on
Saturday, 24th October 2009 @ 06:21:28 PM AEST
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sadly, the unfortunate reality of life sometimes makes existence seem less valuable. you've expressed your grief in a logical manner. sad poems usually whine/complain, but this did not, u gave your reasons why. a brief but powerful piece you've written here.
take care
-K.Z. |
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