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Inner reflection
Contributed by
AshRayne
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Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 01:04:14 AM in AEST
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Look upon yourself,
Concentrate, lightly.
Look for what you’re seeking,
Little seekling,
Broken on the floor.
Unflinching criminal.
Change, rearrange,
Look upon yourself once more.
Copyright ©
AshRayne
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2005-09-10 01:04:14]
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Re: Inner reflection
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 02:43:42 AM AEST
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I like your word use here. Short, to the point, and original. Nicely done.
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Re: Inner reflection
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 04:24:40 AM AEST
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Very different...in a good way!
Great work. |
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Re: Inner reflection
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by loopylou on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 09:01:42 AM AEST
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| Definatley not short and simple, but i think thats what i like about it. Leaves you somthing to think about... |
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Re: Inner reflection
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 01:08:11 PM AEST
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Excellent post here. We all have free will to change our lives to what we want them to be. Very wise words with deep meaning. Sort of a short inspirational help poem. I like it.
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Re: Inner reflection
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 08:45:16 PM AEST
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definately a most prudent poem and well written keep up the craft . . .
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Re: Inner reflection
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by just-b on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 08:05:54 AM AEST
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wow short yes but very superfluous! nicely written . I can dig it..
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