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My Story
Contributed by
jacobmanning
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Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 12:56:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The very first time I saw you,
it was special how we met.
You took me by complete surprise.
But I knew my heart was set.
As days flew by, we talked again,
but you never seemed to care.
I tried my best to help you out,
by a favor here, and there.
Although I made a fast approach,
our friendship grew and grew.
I realized how deep I cared,
but this feeling I felt was new.
In time I became attached to you.
From a hug, I wouldn't let go.
I soon saw how close we were,
That feeling was good to know.
For you, I wrote sweet poems like this.
Because you were on my mind all day.
The thought of sleeping was nowhere near,
unless I knew you were okay.
The minutes without you turned days,
and the seconds with you flew fast.
I could only wish to see you more,
and make each moment last.
The times I spent with you,
were what made my heart complete.
I knew one thing for sure,
without you, my future is obsolete.
But for now, we're friends just the same,
Just friends with each passing day.
Only because when I stare into your eyes,
I'm still speechless to what to say.
With you, I'm in a whole new world.
You bring out the best in me.
It's hard to picture you not there,
when you taught me who to be.
Though problems may lie ahead someday,
and either one of us could be right;
I promise to always be by your side,
I promise you my heart, so hold it tight.
And so, each night, while I lie in bed,
when there's only bright stars to see;
I pray that we may never give up,
and remain friends always, you and me.
Copyright ©
jacobmanning
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2005-09-10 00:56:05]
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Re: My Story
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by mylady on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 06:38:22 AM AEST
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| Very nice story i like it...good luck .....mylady |
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Re: My Story
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by remote on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 08:36:09 AM AEST
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"Though problems may lie ahead someday,
and either one of us could be right;
I promise to always be by your side,
I promise you my heart, so hold it tight." Absolutely brilliant. Rest of it not as good. |
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Re: My Story
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by tonydread on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 08:52:47 AM AEST
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| ok i guess |
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