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°°°True Friends In Words°°°
Contributed by
OreO
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Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 04:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Face of smiles
just for you
i smile whenever
i speak with you
make me tremble
make me weak
for it's true love
that we both seek
dreams come true
instead of two
just one heart beat
one love, one dream
to caress your face
to hold you tight
to taste your lips
each and every night
hesitate for time to come
perhaps one day we become as one
but only time will tell our days
and as for now we dream and play
patient is what we both shall be
presence of you pleases me
judge us not in who we are
we only write from within our hearts
-rejoice in words of wisdom-
-it is our friendship that is golden-
~embraced until morning shunshines upon our faces~
..::Everlasting Friends::..
{Craig S. Meeks & OreO}
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OreO
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2003-01-16 16:40:00]
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Re: °°°True Friends In Words°°°
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 04:45:20 PM AEST
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You two fit together like two peas in a pod!!!!!!!
You write so well together! I enjoy when you guys do this! I want in on one of these!!!! Great write,two friends in words! Christina |
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Re: °°°True Friends In Words°°°
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 04:51:05 PM AEST
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You two are great together!!!! I enjoyed this very much..... Keep this up, Craig and Oreo..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: °°°True Friends In Words°°°
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by nomad on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 05:53:15 PM AEST
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| The love you two share is wonderful, OreO. Glorious, magnificant, beautiful. I can feel the happiness you both share. I'm happy for you. Wonderfully tender and passionate piece. |
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Re: °°°True Friends In Words°°°
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by Lone_er on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 09:51:31 PM AEST
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Beautiful capture of love and friendship and the sometimes mingling of both loves.
Great job maam.
Lone_er |
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Re: °°°True Friends In Words°°°
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by yellow_sundragon on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 11:23:08 PM AEST
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Aww.... friendshippy love, that's the best part.... lucky you guys.... It's a beautiful write my dears, and I enjoyed it!
Jaime |
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Re: °°°True Friends In Words°°°
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 11:57:39 PM AEST
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AHHHHH! I'm becoming a softy I liked this! A lot! It was well written why some ppl have so much talent I don't know. This was very good one of many amazing poems you have written.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: °°°True Friends In Words°°°
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by venkat on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 01:06:38 AM AEST
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| yea.. it is our friendship that is golden..yes we only write from within our hearts--this poem shines like the beautiful face of Dawn..Thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts..venkat |
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Re: °°°True Friends In Words°°°
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by Ronald on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 01:39:44 AM AEST
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| Love this. It's indeed a masterpiece of yours. Thanks for your kind comments once again, my pal! :-) |
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Re: °°°True Friends In Words°°°
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 11:46:10 AM AEST
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Great work you two! Aint love great!!!! hehe
:o) Larry |
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Re: °°°True Friends In Words°°°
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 10:08:30 PM AEST
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| You two are really great poets together. I know your friendship will last forever. Great write. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: °°°True Friends In Words°°°
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by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 07:52:47 AM AEST
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wow i really enjoyed this oreo... i want to thank u for commenting on my poems, u Always make me feel good about my writing, thank you so much....
Broken skin |
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