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Unlucky Numbers
Contributed by
JenJen
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Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 01:07:05 PM in AEST
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Some say 13 is unlucky
I say number 8
There are many suggestions for their thinking
I have a perfectly good reason
The 8th of Septembre
I fell out with a mate
a close one at which
I thought to myself as he shouted
"God I've really messed my friendship up,
as i usually do"
I've said and done things which i shouldnt
I have taken out my angry on him
He has done the same to cover the saddness up
I should have seen it, how unhappy he was
After that fight
I thought more and more about what he said
So many times have i wanted to ask him about it
Some many question
So much worry building up inside
It scaries my
How quickly somebody can start to care
And worry about one person
It scaries me to think about my life without him
I'v been so upset and angry
And he's really helped me out
We'v had long chats over one subject
We'v laughed and cryed with each other
I know i lash out from time to time
I know that i say hurtful things
But you have to understand
I am very sorry and never mean to upset you
I only try to help
Isn't it amazing
How a sad angry poem
Turns into a upseting apology poem
I'm so sorry my friend
Only meant to help
You have every right to hate me
I will understand what ever you decide!
I'm not sure how many times we have had a fight
but i think my unlucky number 8
has something to do with it
-xxx-
Copyright ©
JenJen
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2005-09-09 13:07:05]
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Re: Unlucky Numbers
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 06:58:00 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this piece a lot. It's so sincere and well-written. I truly hope you and your friend work it out. And keep up the great work! |
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Re: Unlucky Numbers
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 04:14:13 PM AEST
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| i really like this one, wonderfuly written |
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