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Me Against the World
Contributed by
M
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Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 12:40:00 PM in AEST
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There's sagety in numbers,
And their army's bigger than mine,
It's me against the world,
And it's only a matter of time,
Until my secrets out,
And they know the truth,
When that happens,
Then they've got proof
And reasons to call me mad.
Distant memories
Of the best fun i ever had,
All in the past,
And now life's full of pain,
Should have known it could never last.
Now this army's playing their game
With my sanity,
Pushing me off with their words,
Should have known it could never be
True friendship.
It's me against the world,
Don't know how long i can take this,
I'm just one new girl,
New to the world i suddenly see,
Missing the girl i used to be,
Fighting the world to stay alive,
Losing my will, losing my drive,
When it's me against the world.
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M
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2003-01-16 12:40:00]
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Re: Me Against the World
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by mckayla on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 12:59:59 PM AEST
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You have a real telent expressing yourself through poetry!! keep writting Ill enjoy reading more of your work
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Re: Me Against the World
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by Dot on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 01:03:06 PM AEST
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| Hi M, you need to decrease the whole world full of people that you say is against you. One obstacle at a time is the best you can do. Very sad poem, well written. Dot |
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Re: Me Against the World
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 01:27:31 PM AEST
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M--- A very good first poem on this site for you!
Keep writing! Christina
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Re: Me Against the World
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by OreO on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 03:19:51 PM AEST
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Ooo how lovely this poem is.....do not let nor allow anyone to play with your sanity like that whether it be an army of people or just one person, you can illiminate those people from your life quickly lest they should only try and hurt you as such. Those people don't deserve your friendship and they certainly don't deserve your time, this is such a sad write it brought tears to my eyes.....i enjoyed this alot....thank you for sharing this one......welcome to YPDC...i look forward to reading more of your beautiful poetry...
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Re: Me Against the World
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by wyrd_faerie on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 03:58:43 PM AEST
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| you never showed me this! it's beautiful, and em...it's not you against the world, because i'm fighting it all the way with you...i'll hold your hand and pull you along, you know i will, i'll always be here, forever xxx |
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Re: Me Against the World
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by ladymae3 on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 04:01:32 PM AEST
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i dont like the :should have known it could never b tru friendship. it makes it sound like ur a new gurl at a school. and soo i dunno, it sounds like u care wat they think, which is sad. i do like:
And it's only a matter of time,
Until my secrets out,
And they know the truth,
When that happens,
Then they've got proof
And reasons to call me mad. |
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Re: Me Against the World
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 04:23:53 PM AEST
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welcome to YPDC, M.. This is a lovely write...Follow your heart tho...
Jenni |
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